......Ice bergs

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ice bergs float on water

thoughts float on consciousness .......

Sunlight's heat melts icebergs.......

Intelligence's logic melts thoughts , fetishes ,

fantasies.......

only water remains when icebergs melt .......

what remains when thought melts ........??

figure it out , Sweet Reader ........


Om .........

Ashesh9
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wakingDownwakingDownalmost 9 years ago
Thought provoking

and driving, the kind of work I highly prize. I would posit that what is left after intelligences melts thoughts is decisions or convictions. Just my take, however. As for the work as a whole, bravo man. I can scarcely believe that there are no other comments on this poem as it is structured clean and balanced, with an airy and ethereal feel that is weighted with a ballast of 'om,' calling for the reader to attain a deeper understanding of something that would otherwise seem to be always out of reach. Well done indeed.