In His Need

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He loves me more
when I love someone else
juiced up and ready to swallow
takes precedence over everything felt.
Sure, the far away look is puzzling
as is the occasional grin
but the content threatens fiercely
and is enough to break the man.
Just as long as I’m dripping
everything is okay
the fool doesn’t see the truth
as I’m slipping further each day.
It’s almost as if he takes my hand
and casually gives me away.
The man needs me most
the minute he’s been betrayed.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Try something else

Sorry, but this one was ‘a non starter’for me. I could never see the point in singing in praise of hurting or laughing on account of other people’s account. I could not see the point in constructing a poem for the sake of praising contemptuous attitude to the one a person is supposed to love; being stuck in meaningless little one up manship games when life is so short. Set this man free and get some life of your own! And no, I could trace no Irony here (the last resort for unfortunate works)To LeBroz: A. You probably meant the tale of the cuckolder B. I was wondering, where did you get this statistic from? Does it refer to the US? I wonder what method was used to collect the information. Just curious.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Tale of a cuckold? Explains the stat I heard of where 25-33% of children are not from the husband. That many quys are clueless?

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