Incisive

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pious poets posture
pick the perfect word
preferring syntax over substance

edit the emotion
submerge it in an ocean
of overthoought

morph the humanity into
boring inanity
fuck the perfection
fuck the relfection

moments of heart and hurt
are not about revision
but the incisons of the moment
open wounds
witout sutures
bleeding
gasping
pleading
expiring

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WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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Good line about revision, "moments of heart and hurt are not about revision" but I still feel like I want to revise this poem a little. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
tongue tied me <grinin

<chuckleboned... ya got me, cool poem (~_~)

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Man!

There will ALWAYS be a kind woman who will give you some soft hugs if you tell her that you have an open bleeding wound!

But what I like is that I found myself doing the movements that rappers do before this ended -you got me by the rhythm!

p.s. are you saying that you posted it in one flow - no changes - no breaks for thought- like automatic writing?

LiarLiarover 17 years ago
Interresting...

...the way you clash

presicion

in form and content

with intent

of impresicion.

Intentional,

or an indent

in the insicion?

TeeTeeTeeTeeover 17 years ago
Exactly

what i'm sayin', ya know? Great read thanks for sharing

TT

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