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Click herepious poets posture
pick the perfect word
preferring syntax over substance
edit the emotion
submerge it in an ocean
of overthoought
morph the humanity into
boring inanity
fuck the perfection
fuck the relfection
moments of heart and hurt
are not about revision
but the incisons of the moment
open wounds
witout sutures
bleeding
gasping
pleading
expiring
Good line about revision, "moments of heart and hurt are not about revision" but I still feel like I want to revise this poem a little. :)
There will ALWAYS be a kind woman who will give you some soft hugs if you tell her that you have an open bleeding wound!
But what I like is that I found myself doing the movements that rappers do before this ended -you got me by the rhythm!
p.s. are you saying that you posted it in one flow - no changes - no breaks for thought- like automatic writing?
...the way you clash
presicion
in form and content
with intent
of impresicion.
Intentional,
or an indent
in the insicion?