Indigo Eyes

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with irishcatsmeow

Indigo eyes glance shyly as he picks up his guitar
ready to strum a love-gone-wrong tune,
his voice slides right off the side of the mountain
bouncing into her veins, a rubber ball gone awry.

In the darkened bar she stands as if compelled
to test electrical sparks emanating from his eyes.
Her body moves marionette like to each plucked string
drawing him into her as only imagination's bubble can.

The plaintive wail of his guitar strikes her heart,
pierces the pillars of solitary indifference
and touches a place that til now was walled in stone.
Trembling, she embraces her epiphany, waiting

as his eyes finally lift to her swaying abandon.
Her dancing mesmerizes, her aura captivates;
the dance hall falls away and as the guitar sings
two lone souls entwine in the magical night.

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
very nice~

I like this poem~

the dance and guitar...

poetic and the team write

makes it awesome...

great poem~6bbc

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
very nice~

I like this poem~

the dance and guitar...

poetic and the team write

makes it awesome...

great poem~6bbc

Daisy MayDaisy Mayover 19 years ago
Nice

work you two! Good team. I don't know how you managed this but it was definitely worth the read.

the dance hall falls away and as the guitar sings

two lone souls entwine in the magical night.

(I really liked those lines)

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