Intentions

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intentions flow like the rain
careless drops
acidic
your tongue
casting long glances in my direction
winking under the florescents
love looking too pale in this light
fingers stroke
sweeping my skin together
melting
one puddle
bodies burning into the touch
i love you
slips out like violet honey
my lips
press against yours
and i know that it's over

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting...

Nice to read and reread... and still wonder :)

The_DarknessThe_Darknessover 19 years ago
Nicely done

Erotic and haunting at the same time. This one will be sticking with me for a while.

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
lovely

This is a lovely poem, SIMA...it stays with you.

~Honey

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Just Lovely

You've beautifully woven the language into something that is simultaneously real and ethereal. Amazing work.

gotwood49gotwood49over 19 years ago
Very sensual, SIMA

Gorgeous images: 'melting...one puddle' and 'winking under the flourescents' give it a gritty, but senuous feel. Very erotic, very HOT. Nice!

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