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Liar
Liar
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no longer than
the nanosecond
in which a photon
bleeds encapsulated
energy signalling
presence and position
did I wait

no further than
the space between
now and then
where a thin
slice of present
splits history
into record
and uncertainty
did you get

no louder than
this thought
tearing grey matter
apart
did I speak

no slower than
the carousel
of tides
and the swirl
of galaxies
did you turn

no longer than
this iota
did it take

to still
my panic

this time

 

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Exciting brevity and concision

Your words cut, slice, move through space like a prima ballerina's leg of steel in an allegro that stops time. Bravo.

IcingsugarIcingsugarabout 20 years ago
contrast

After reading denis hale's poem listed above, this was such a contrast that I had to take a breather before being able to read it. Small, humble and delicate. A significant blink of an eye put into words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
:-)

Lovely use of dry words to produce a succulent poem. A five, fer sure.

RybkaRybkaabout 20 years ago
Tiddles & Jots

Very good! >?(((><

(BTW, only one "l" in "signalling".)

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