- Non-Erotic Poetry
- It's Finally Over
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Oh thank God it's finally over
All the hugs, good wishes and cheer
Different masks all just worn for cover
To conceal the depression of another year
My reason for sadness? You're not around.
Every day I miss you so very much-
Your laughter, your hair falling over your eyes
The hugs and kisses, your touch
So many special occassions, so many lonely sighs
Thanksgiving, Christmas, New Year-no happiness.
What a season to be so full of woe
People smiling, making plans with family
Trees decorated-on every branch a bow
Death has taken you far from me
But I'd bring you back if only I could.
The pain is still deep and very intense
And time has proven not to be my friend
Some things simply make no sense
Like why we had so little time before the end
At least in my dreams we're still together.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoRemember to show not tell. Give the reader images to create in his or her mind rather than telling them how you feel. It's more effective that way.
