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in the buoyant waters of hope, I
float
on the potential for a love that has the power to
tame
the persistent undertow of futility
currents of inky desire
swirl
in the turbulent vortex of my mind as your eyes
sparkle
with unspoken passion
no longer content to simply
drift
upon the sinuous waves of synchronous dreams, I
swim
against the tides of convention
silently begging you to
take
my hands and my heart and my hope, I
crash
upon the shores of your torment
while I did not
choose
to love you, I would not now
change
to avoid the roiling seas of controversy
fear thrives only on the surface, we finally
discover,
when with wonder we
dive
into the tranquil depths of our future
when with wonder we
dive
into the tranquil depths of our future
I think this is the third poem of yours that I've read and they all have kick ass endings. And beginnings and middles and everything else.
Very stirring poem, having achieved the very difficult task of being applicable to a great many situations. I loved it.
~lucky
a poetic icon and very inspirational,
a witty and clever poet with a very
good flare for hitting the heart string
painting two beautiful pictures with
one poem~
Art~
I enjoyed this one, impressive; very nice imagery. The line breaking was a bit disruptive to me- it seemed to halt the flow of a very liquid poem.
I know you where you are coming from with this poem...I love it - it's like you are in my head.
Great job!!
Honey