Kamikaze prayer (Grab a partner)

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Life’s greatest blessing arrived
packaged in pink ribbons and lace
thrown on the floor, five foot four
of answered prayers, eyes aglow

with suppressed desire, flames fanned by breath
hot with sexual desire, lips devouring
minutes, hours twisted with tremors
as bodies connect in wild abandonment

swept by surging urges of animal want
spreading, diving, desperately tight
body knot unraveling, sweaty limbs akimbo
submerging, colliding, flames licking flesh

temptation tickled and indulged
spiraling, screaming, abandoned control
crashing in spontaneous combustion
kamikaze death midst erotic inferno

*written by lildarlin and tungtied2u for the Grab a Partner challenge

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
new poems review

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

for Saturday Dec 11 2004

thanks for the read~

skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Recognised

I thought I recognised some of LilDarlin's words and ideas here.

Well done, both of you.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Whoosh

up in flames

really good work

liked this

"swept by surging urges of animal want"

dive right in attitude

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Dear Santa

I've been a (reasonably) good boy this year. Can I have me one of those? :D

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