Laser Surgery

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Liar
Liar
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bygones be bygones
I know once my halftones
were drip drop dripping down
your collarbone
frames canvas

as if cyan
my fingerpaint digits
would swirl through
to touch your
magenta rushing heart

and draw
naivistic purple clouds
across your breast

but yellow your geist
and black my intentions
all faded
to watered down gray

just when warning lights flared
"Toner Low"
and finally all
sputtered out
was a blank sheet
virginal deception
in white

as if as if...
bygones was bygones
and refilled carriages
fresh ink bleeding
could tattoo a stitch
to sew shut this rift
ever again

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
!!

as if as if...

bygones was bygones

and refilled carriages

fresh ink bleeding

could tattoo a stitch

to sew shut this rift

ever again -Loved it!!

High 5!

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Yummy

This felt like undulating energy - that make sense? lol, point is, I loved it.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's New Poems Reviews

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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This is good. I like how you made something ordinary, which is used every day, and made it extraordinary with inventive phrasing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This was like....

..unwrapping a gift and finding something totally unexpected. I love it! Thank you.

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