Let Her

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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/17/2021
Created 01/30/2012
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Let her obey him:
unambiguous demands
help her find solace;
he might even evoke
a certain duality
as he repeats these;

The clues he might give
are lost in an ocean of pain
as he sears her mind,
takes from her dynamic
and excoriates her flesh
for not listening;

It's true he ordered
her, (in the first place), sorrow:
a contrived irony,
amassed through her service,
and unrelenting usage
at each opportunity;

He affords his pet
an accord with sweet pleasure
of suffering, for
not entertaining
the grandest of delusions
he first let her obey.

(with thanks to Pandora for inspiring this)

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
BY ALLOWING FREEDOMS

one sacrifices freedom. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
wow

i miss being "His" pet. But He doesn't realize what "He" threw away, lol. I enjoyed the read.

~ maria