Let Me Be The One

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Exakta66
Exakta66
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When life hands you so much sorrow and pain,
And takes so much with little to gain,
You're like a train that somehow left the track,
Can we ever get the good times back?

Do you recall when the world was so new?
And there seemed no limit to what we could do,
Harking back to those simpler times,
Of children's books and nursery rhymes.

Can you remember those simple joys?
Childhood dreams and children's toys,
How did we ever lose our way?
Can we ever get back to that day?

Yet somehow those dreams all have faded,
Have we really become that jaded?
The only cure for lost love is a love that's new,
The only love that matters is a love that's true.

And here we are, two souls destined to meet,
Why should we ever accept defeat?
For us our lives have just begun,
We can do this together, let me be the one.

11-24-10.

Exakta66
Exakta66
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vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Hmmm..

Your a pretty good poet but end rhyme is letting down a such serious subject matter. If you really need a rhyming scheme to write, try move them into the middle of the line. I think you can be really great.