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A flick of my Bic
a spark jumped forth
headed north into
unknown territory
set up camp
flourished and grew
you cramped
pushed
new life
burned bright
just from a flick
of my Bic

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I'd drop the cramped part

other than that, good poem.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
To the point!

this line seems out of place, birth? Is so, that part should be developed further, everything else works fine as Bic.

"you cramped"

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
bouncing babies!

clever little metaphor tt.

xx

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