- Erotic Poetry
- Linger Lightly, Lilting Love
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Click hereI want her lady lullabye,
her lively loaded lulling eye,
her lithsome, lonely lady sigh,
her litany and her long goodbye,
I want her lasting, lisping cry,
her liberal lecture and lewd reply,
her livid lure, her licit thigh,
each libelous lip which lowly lies,
I want her languid listless stride,
her lilting lust, her lurid pride,
each lucid leak, each literate find,
the lolling linger of a love combined.
- COMMENTS
sweetNpassionabout 15 years agoAllitration dos enot make you a good poet but I would not excpect you to understand what makes a good poet..This site is eveyone, remember that!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CBDannieDabout 15 years agoI think it would of been perfect with "our" at the end instead of "a love combined" it's all very jojo. smooch!
EroticOrogenyabout 15 years agoI use a lot of alliteration and assonance in my work.
Never just with 1 letter though, a few rhymes.
Maria2394about 15 years agoor maybe because of them...I liked your poem. It is harder than most people realize to write a poem like this and still make sense. Yours did.
bflagsstabout 15 years agoOnly partially kidding. This is almost a poem, you got lost in the L words though, specifically in the last stanza.
Keep on trucking, you suck.
