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Click herelou's limb
I fell out of love
it was like jumping off a cliff
knowing that I will never return
free falling to my destiny
I never figured
the root of a new love
would protrude into my life
from the face of this cliff
and catch me mid way down
a real cliff hanger
dangling between worlds
the past and the future
wondering what to do
hanging on to you
not wanting to fall again
holding onto Lou's limb
I begin climbing
Another interesting change here
But then, I have been rather idle of late;
Missing much that's been wrote for nearly a couple months.
An interesting mataphor on the perils of love...
usage of metaphor is delightful and I liked the title very much...different...blue
Good use of metaphor here. Your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews.
Good use of metaphor here. Your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews.