- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Malaise
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I just noticed while swirling
swishing and spitting, to clean
turn and lift, Crane patented
so many nights unnoticed
how many more answers
have drifted by unobserved
as thoughts obscure observations,
too busy to notice life's details
auto pilot, off to work
fuck the crystals, clear the windshield
obliterate uniqueness, another day
to buckle under to the ordinary
Slow down ! Smell. See. Absorb.
Inundate in everyness !
Relish in the chill as you shiver
from top to tail. Shake yourself
into being. This moment matters
if you can be here. Never again
will you be here. The end
is unpredictable. Pay attention
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 16 years agoTwo things I like about you, your sense of rhythm, and everything I reread your poetry, the meaning seems to shift, I was going to say I don't like this (blah, blah) but it seems like it was there for a reason, I haven't quite got a fix on it, and that is a very good thing. IMHO
steve porterover 16 years agoGreat read, nice rhythm, crisp images, pulling back the curtain for a glimpse of a day in the life...brrr...thanks.
