- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Memorize Me
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stilled life in darkness poised
repose under the raspberry blush
of a veiled aperture
dawn's kiss parts draped night
bringing day in diffusion
pierced by the shudder speed
of stilled loving;
a shutter sped on vocal lengths
breathless interlude captured;
freeze framed in naked contrast
and ambient wonder
tastes of shadow and sunlight
on sheets and skin
in the peppermint blink of mind's eye
forget not
the monochromatic simplicity
seen through passion's lens
on a stolen Sunday morning
- COMMENTS
lucky-E-levenover 16 years agoArtfully told from the eye of a camera; it's the perfection of the moment that makes me want to never forget a single detail. You captured that nicely here.
I'd be happy for the chance to Memorize you.
yuiover 18 years ago"stilled life in darkness poised" I love that line. It has the bones of something great in it. Well done!
Belegonover 18 years agothe way you use monochromatic and hint at black and white while also using things like "raspberry" & "peppermint" that hint at color...
dcpoet44over 18 years agoeven though the title wasn't an eye grabber, the rest of sure did.
