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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/11/2021
Created 04/12/2004
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Liar
Liar
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she was weather, never static
always flirting fluctuation
inter dermic, automatic
currents tugging correlation

she was weather, sang the shimmer
just like sunshine through the thunder
misty morning surface skimmer
weeping trails to worlds down under

she was weather, chaos dancer
I was static, concrete coded
she was question, I was answer
but by rain and storm eroded

she was weather, music soaring
in a world of imperfection
I was concrete, but exploring
trying beauty by projection

she was weather, swirling through me
I was weathered, weak and hollow
her tornado whispered to me
and I fell as dust, to follow

Liar
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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Wow... this one danced....

the best of the echoing 4 I think, excellent meter and rhyme flowed so naturally. I loved the repetition like a shaman's chant. Very good...

jim : )

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Whether three Hiawatha

The cadence is hard to not fall into. The images are strong, the words fresh. - Well done.

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