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Click hereshe was weather, never static
always flirting fluctuation
inter dermic, automatic
currents tugging correlation
she was weather, sang the shimmer
just like sunshine through the thunder
misty morning surface skimmer
weeping trails to worlds down under
she was weather, chaos dancer
I was static, concrete coded
she was question, I was answer
but by rain and storm eroded
she was weather, music soaring
in a world of imperfection
I was concrete, but exploring
trying beauty by projection
she was weather, swirling through me
I was weathered, weak and hollow
her tornado whispered to me
and I fell as dust, to follow
the best of the echoing 4 I think, excellent meter and rhyme flowed so naturally. I loved the repetition like a shaman's chant. Very good...
jim : )
The cadence is hard to not fall into. The images are strong, the words fresh. - Well done.