monday's sunset

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lobomao
lobomao
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this warm scented evening
we burn together
into the sunsets
caresses of body
finding firm valleys
deep hungry lakes
purple mountains majesty
racing the sun
over hill
downy dale
with our passion
and pitch
in the fading light
our skin turns
to deep red wine
to hot summer blood
to strong love's liquor
worked too fast between us
flows and sprays to stain the sky
as we watch the world shift
beneath our feet
your eyes full
with me inside
and around you
the complete act
of holding you
against the night

lobomao
lobomao
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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interesting, this and the other seem like bits and pieces, grafted together, slightly changed - Frankenpoetry?

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