More Than I (Probably) Think

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I'll gather vicious words for they still tempt
me to new themes, though I will hardly think
of all she needs assuaged; I'd scarce have dreamt
how she now takes me so close to this brink;

A once and future muse:
she's held within my consciousness,
where, being quite the bitch,
she stays

And waits for me to pace the floor; and mark
the rhythm she's perverted to attend
upon hurtful design; for this ensures
I'll gather vicious words for they still tempt.


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FrozenFantasyFrozenFantasyover 12 years ago
This poem

is so much more worthy than the norm I read here, which are no more than critical utterances of those who apparently see themselves as genius, but in fact rarely entertain words of more than two syllables. It appears as well that these few merely exist to applaud each the other's lack of meter and substance. I don't claim to be plucked from the vine of overly-ripened masters who bear the stamp of critics, but I do know what I like. As for those who post anonymously, it might make you appear more credible should you attend to your spelling and capitalization, at least!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
yuk

and thats all I have to say about that. im not being mean, but u can do so much better

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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this is quite a nice break. I prefer verse libre, over what I assume was the iambic block you've been writing. Nice what you did with the 1st and last line encasing the poem, nice balance setting off the fulcrum "A once and future muse:"

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Somebody else can attend to the punctuation.