Morning Fog

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sack
sack
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As the darkness slowly lifts
a chill permeates the leaden air
The black curtain slowly parts
to reveal the gray underbelly

Mist and steam
are a team
So it would seem
I could gleam

In the corner of my fogged glasses
I see a reflection of a shivering squirrel
The relentless cold has chilled it to the bone
and the dense fog rubs the salt in

Mist and steam
are so mean
icy and lean
I do deem

The sky lightens
bare trees are globs of dark paint
running into the gray canvas
Anonymous, faded glories

Mist and steam
oddly unseen
I am keen
To end the dream

The sun peers through
tentative and questioning
dew drops are electrified
in an eerie orange glow

Mist and steam
pure and clean
What do I mean?
off white cream

Shadows appear
as the sun cuts through
Morning fog gives way
to gentian blue sky

Mist and steam
are a team
They will return
to dust a fern

The radiant orb is triumphant
But only for a few hours
As the sunset slowly wanes
morning fog is renewed evermore

sack
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
gentle float.

Fog creeps upon the land softly landing ~ the sunrise brings danger -the morning sun cuts through.

Bandit1Bandit1over 19 years ago
Better than any of mine!

You have a real flair for poetry, and it shows here in this poem.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
interesting

with the rhyming stanzas. I occasionally toss those into my own poems. I notice that your last rhyming stanza strays from the AAAA pattern and goes with an AABB one. Which seems to work okay. :)

moonblademmoonblademover 19 years ago
;)

I love the way this flows, Sack. Thanks for the wonderful read! :)

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