Mounting Urges

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She loves to be arousing, when outside;
Having been stripped, she's soon to be enjoyed
By eyes that watch her nakedness: the slide
of his gaze makes her blush; he has deployed
A look of such discernment; but, she sees
Her effect on his body is intense;

So, it is time to get down on her knees
And crawl across to delight - recompense
Will be forthcoming; for this wanton lass
Is ready to oblige and to provide
Sweet moments of pure pleasure: she has class
That comes into its own to coincide
With urges that are mounting; her carousing,
As she comes close, is certainly arousing.

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed of course

Public Service announcement

this is how the lines are read:

she's soon to be enjoyed By eyes that watch her nakedness:

the slide of his gaze makes her blush;

he has deployed A look of such discernment;

what he is doing is employing a device called enjambment, what it can do is add emphasis to the important rhyme like carousing/ arousing.

certainly arousing,eh

He generally does it well

in case some of you didn't know that

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Sweeeeet !!

5-ed .