- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Nativity
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I was blue ice above the moon
Great bolts of wind I was one time
Diamonds, Tempests, Whole crowns of trees
Torn tumbling through chutes of roaring skies
There were ribbons of heaven unrolling
Day after vexing day
Evening after claw-toed evening
It was fate who brought me here
Fate who flung me down and left me
Singing
Who will have me now?
Oh, who will have me now?
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 16 years agoI humbly confess to not being able to grasp the identity of the speaking voice (on any level) or the theme (beyond nativity).<P>
The images though are powerful and original.<P>
I tried storm but it did not work for me with the ending or with tne big cosmic context at the begining. I'd love to be enlightened!
Anonymousover 16 years agoIncredible imagery. About the need for redemption. Your poems are getting better every time you write. Leighlilly
LeBrozover 16 years agoBirth or origin of — what? An intriguing piece you've penned here. Try reading this during a violent storm — that'll get your mind working!
