- Erotic Poetry
- nautic infatuation
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Click hereto once again chase breakers
in the gleam of salty baptism
sea blessing your presence
currents and power pockets
whipping breakers
to tumble
filling
our five meter haven
with the symphony
of creaking boards
just us two
but no crowd wished
when half of that pair
slicks her sea-stained
wetness to hug
at previously hinted
heaven now revealed
sea blessing our presence
so we take in sail,
anchor or drift,
spreading lifejackets
like a canvas
the painting of us
filling
our five meter haven
with the symphony
of creaking boards
again
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 20 years agoSailing, or just wallowing on calm seas, with a wooden boat talking to you. Their character is so much stronger than those fiberglass fillies.
This poem says it all and more.
Syndra Lynnabout 20 years agoThis has such a wonderful wet and loving feel. I love the symphony of creaking boards. Bravo.
jthserraabout 20 years agothat line sounded a bit odd, in an excellent poem. I was reminded of Ariel's song... "Full fathom five..." An interesting look at a cold, wet time...
jim : )
sandspikeabout 20 years agoThere is something romantic about saiing even on a
wooden boat. Good job
