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i could easily get it from her:
(com)passion
and understanding
and love

i could even get it from
*shudder*
him
sans understanding, anyway

i can't get it from them
they're far too young
to even want it
outside themselves

i could get it here
to some degree
from some (ir)regulars
who understand peripherally

but it's not only the what
that i need
it's the who, too
i want it from you

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Words that dance with feelings that haven't been asked to dance in a long time.

ty,bd

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEalmost 19 years ago
Not.......

Crapola.

I think you've struck a chord in all of us.

NoJoNoJoalmost 19 years ago
Great...

Really liked it, imp.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 19 years ago
I saw layers in this

Gave me a wistful feeling on the first read - so many things matter for it to feel right! Then, it struck me as bold and pointed - yes, my needs can be filled elsewhere, but I choose you to do it. I'll be wondering which it is.

CrapolaCrapolaover 19 years ago
Coin Toss ...

... on whether or not you're an idiot. You lost.

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