Ocean Lovers

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Ocean Lovers
RedHairedandFriendly

Calming winds hit my face
as you hold me in your deep embrace.

Wispy clouds hover above
a feeling of us and our great love.

Ocean waves touch our toes
as we realize that the other one knows.

Sea gulls call beside our feet
as with a smile our bodies begin to heat.

Dolphins leap from the water blue
as we slide to the sand brown hue.

Shells beside us lie and wait
to watch two lovers try to sedate.

Crabs and lobsters sit on the shore
seeing the site of two learning more.

Seaweed billows at the waters edge
as man and woman start to reach the ledge.

Salt touches the bodies of flesh
that move and slide and finally mesh.

Splashes of waters heat each time
the lovers dine on their bodies like wine.

Pebbles of pleasure dig at their skin
as nature surrounds them and welcomes them in.

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
SHALL WE LEAP AND END

or turn and begin anew. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
mmm, a wave..

of emotion, swims through my ocean... how you made me want to dip my toes in sand.... -sgp-

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Great visualization and while it flows well

seems a bit too list-like (just a small point);

I sense great talent here.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sensual Flow ~

I like this one !!

Felt as if I were there, peepin !!

Great imagery, sexy ... sensual flow too.

You did great with this one.

Just a lil steam and sweet love.

More Please ~