outer limits

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outer limits

frustration; a sign of a limited mind
that has reached its limitations
anything above and beyond
must be, the outer limits

The imagination soars
in a labrynith of possibilities
seeking the mystic origin
of the twighlight zone

awakened in a dream
asleep while time travels
walking through a day
never placing a foot in reality

the inner circle of thought
a sixth sense is found
gazing at the infinite horizon
the outer limits

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Gaia_LorraineGaia_Lorraineover 17 years ago
Matt. 7.1 "Judge Not Lest Ye Be Judged"

A couple of self-flagellatory typo's, I know how it hurts. But it should not detract from what would otherwise be an excellent piece of prose.

Matt 7:1 seems to support the allusion that we are not to judge at all IF we use small-vision tactics by narrow-mindedly selecting only that SMALL piece of the total. Matt 7:1 DOES NOT tell us not to judge at all -- it tells us to not judge with unfairness or superficiality: to not use our own understanding to judge.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.