Pairs de Opposicion

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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the Conjoined Twins
Pairs deOpposition
Merge asOne
Dogs'n Cats merge as One
Black'n White merge as One
Red'n Blue merge as One
Giraffe'n Zebra merge as One
Elephant'n Horse merge as One !
Dolphin'n Shark merge as One
Fire Engine'n Ambulance merge as One
Men'n Women merge as One
Lingam'n Yoni merge as One
Phallus et Vagina merge as One
Militant Feminist et Male Chauvinist
merge as One
Marxist et Capitalist merge as One
Good et Evil merge as One
God et Devil merge as One
One Universal Soul
One Cosmic Whole
Paramatman
Existence
Consciousness
Bliss
Peace
O M<.center>

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

Mmm... I think the way you wrote it leads the reader toward the conclusion ("consciousness, bliss, peace") at a good pace. I like how you start using single words toward the end, it adds some urgency as it rushes to that final "O M"...

...not that I agree that all this merging leads to "bliss". But that isn't really important, is it? :)

About the "center" tag at the end, it seems like whomever put this poem online must have mistyped it (in this case, replaced a / with a dot). Maybe you should report it and ask to have it checked out.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years agoAuthor
This <center> In the last line was certainly

Not in my original Poem !?

Wonder where it came from !?

buttersbuttersabout 10 years ago

hi, ash - i felt the use of the conjoined twins was probably the strength of this write: though 2 separate minds, with their own way of thinking, they need to work together as one in order to achieve. do i feel you belaboured the point as i read on through? yeah, a little. the mixing and blending of language felt natural to me, and its use (i'm assuming) was part of the 'eradicate/blend differences till they merge and become 'one'.

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