Pan's pipes

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Pan’s pipes fill the forest primeval
Moonlit maidens dance to his tune
Goddess’ gathered beneath mother Earth’s canopy
While warlocks chant a spell of renewal.
Instinctual, carnal
primordial passions build
Limbs entwine
Power surges
Urging souls embrace
Nature’s communion
Worship power’s source
Coursing through their veins
The heat and longing of the ages
Witches weave, warlocks writhe
Sisters and brothers
Celebrating the mother
Blessed be.

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Thanks

for the wonderful poem. Paints a wonderful picture of Pagan celebration. Well done.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
very nice

I read the poem first, comments, then I respond. So, I see that forest primeval also didn't work for someone else. Try reading it without primeval. It flows much better.

Still, a very nice poem. Thank you!

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
has a nice

flow and I liked the thoughts behind the message....thanks...blue

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Plenty of Alliteration

The poem flows

well aided by

similar sounds.

I only object strongly

to "forest primeval".

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
some

nice word choices and couplings here.

and a nice rhythm

thank you

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