pantys in the garden

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Fingers firmly interlaced in hair
pulled like a cord of a lawn mower
it fired her up. Shredding clothes
weed-eater style, humming
as silent as a yard blower.

Fingers raked along the back
as a piercing spade repeatedly
entered soft soil that trim the bush.

Hard wood hoe handle grasp
on the rubber water hose
as a rainbow of passionate colors
spew from a sprinkler's head
showering panty's wet
that lay like colorful pansies in the garden

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thedogman77004thedogman77004over 17 years ago
I'm gardening with you.

I liked it the way that you put it as to gardening.

I see a few little changes but I truely understood and felt it.

I put the loving of last to the words.

keep going.

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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Most of the poem has good lines. A few not as good. It should be panties in the title.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 18 years ago
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Well done Art! Image rich works. (check the use of the apostrophe.)

wso

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This made me laugh

A funny little write. Thanks for the read.