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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

Dreams
to curve space,
short board trip
the event horizon.

Grab an abacus
and discover god
lurking in the no man's land
where mathematics trails off
and meta physics is just
warming up.

Don't you dream
of a truth to prove
the entireness wrong,
undo a reality knot
and send logic shattered
into the void?

Dreams
to möbius loop time
into tangents of possible,
to juggle singularities
and live
to tell the tale.

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
Manic Pride

I have to love a poem that turns a redhead into a blonde.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
mentioned

Your poem was mentioned in the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey in words~

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
dreamers

use technology to unlock the secrets or paths needed for a better world than create discourse in confrontation of finger pointing or blame for what is not in a land that isn't to fix what is? well I think I understand and like the concept or either you jotted down a brain fart I mean brain storm, thanks for sharing liar.

ReltneReltnealmost 19 years ago
Parminedic?

I greatly enjoyed the poem, but the title loses me. I can't even Google "Parminedic". The closest I can come is the Greek philosopher Parmenides. If you didn't transpose, will you enlighten?

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Great work

A fantastic piece,

a joy to read.

Loved it,

Thanks.

~ J

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