Parting Embrace

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parting embrace
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

more than it appears
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

an excuse to touch
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

bodies pressed together
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

too brief to savor
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

breathe now
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

please, this time more
one thousand one ...                     
                       ... one thousand two

the night draws near
... one thousand three ...
imparting embrace

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
How does it feel?

made me feel like a 1st grader trying to understand a children's story/poem??

Anonymous, you still have delusions of granduer, it will be years before you get to a 1st grade level of reading. Since this poem is well above a 1st grade level of reading of course you didn't understand it.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
~

The elasticity of time divided by the want of flesh equals this poem.

ty,bd

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Oh yes!

Oh, I totally know that hesitant, hopeful, expectant yearning! "An excuse to touch ~ too brief to savor..." Splendidly done! Thank you. LJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
That got me...

... right there *points at pussy*. Um, no! Scrap that! I meant *points at heart*. ;)

Well done, Imp! Very concise and powerful poem.

Lou

xxx

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
This is....

great crapola. I think I read it before, but I must have forgotten to post...LOL.

Keep up with the crapola, it works.

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