Pearl

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

It starts with sand,
a grain of imperfection
rubbing tender thoughts raw.

A seed of hurt,
a notion askew
in virginal terrain,
triggers ancient instincts.

And you wrap motherly
a gentler layer, then another.
Build riches around infection,
enclose, embed, protect.

Until all we see is beauty,
a jewel in your hand,
glowing for the world
to marvel.

But we all know
why it glitters
so pretty.

Don't we?

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
excellent poetry

inspirational liar (~_~)

sacksackover 18 years ago
intriguing comparison.

I don't think you took too long to build this up, and would keep stanzas one and two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

I think you take too long building the metaphor, but it is a good one. You probably don't need S1 AND S2.

Fly

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ah...

that grindstone of life...know it well...lovely liar...sighs...blue

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