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my breath caught,
gasping,
as orgasm
upon orgasm
masked the choking
in my throat
for you.
when you ask me
what's wrong,
it's nothing,
but i know you know,
like you knew
that "perfect"
really meant "love"
and layers of sediment
in my heart
had been stripped away
to create a path
for you.
my breath catches now
as i lay on my side
after the phone's been
put away.
there was her
and now there's you
even though we both
understand
it isn't the same.
impulsiveness
rises in my throat
threatening
mocking
daring me
to say things i'll regret.
but as i hear your voice
i know you'll be gentle
the intention
not to hurt.
you tell me with affection
and remind me
that the fates
will sort this out.

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Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Great poem

You have such a talent, SIMA. We are very lucky to have you share it with us.

~Honey

hanz_xenahanz_xenaabout 19 years ago
SIMA

WOW thats all i can say WOW

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Urges

so hard to keep at bay, those things which you feel so intensely.

you conveyed this so well here. Awesome job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Perfect

indeed. Intense images, emotional, searing. Would that you had shown me.......before this.

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