- Non-Erotic Poetry
- PLUR Psalms 01: Annunciation
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Angel Gabrielle
(my sister’s bff)
appears before me,
a vision:
glitter hair hula skirt cute
dimples lip-ring
moon boots fairy wings
Glad tidings (the angel says):
you’re going out to firestone with us tonight
you’ll love it so
I’ve brought you a pill
do not be afraid
This greeting troubles
I try to demure
But the angel answers:
you will be called raver
find favor in the crowd
the music claims you
in the thrall of your high
behold your sister Lizzy
proclaims this gospel too
I am made servant to the beat:
as they spoke, it is done.
Ecstasy leapt in my belly, for my joy
This generation calls me blessed
- COMMENTS
Angelineover 13 years agoThough I think I preferred the other psalm over this which seems a little wordy to me: not much, but maybe you could do some judicious pruning and have a stronger piece. But I say that in the context of this being (imo) a really good poem to begin with.
GuiltyPleasureover 13 years agoIt held me to the end. The better, imo, of your two PSALMS but both are unusual and intriguing.
Tess
