- Erotic Poetry
- private hindsight rant
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Click heregod dammit
you, yes you
get out, begone
exit my mind
those eyes, those thighs
those bloody beautiful
luscious little lies
that ties me
tongue tied
slack jawed
brain zapped
swooning
over dreams
sublime
just beat it
(oh I will)
oh, fuck it
(oh I wish)
just leave me here
with me and myself
and ay ay ay
oh god, oh my
irresistible
to my aching eye
and my shaking hands
and my tingling spine
I am lost in this maze
I can take it no more
abandoned amazed
all instinct, no core
begone
be not
so damn
divine
get out
of my face
or please,
be mine
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 20 years agoHindsight is always perfect, they say, private or not. I loved the feel of this snappy piece.
YDDabout 20 years ago. . . for Valentine's Day!
A not so gentle plea, but the eroticism is,
and nicely done as well.
Just enough rhyme and alliteration to bring the reader up to the speed of the rant/write.
Then it surges on under its own momentum.
WickedEveabout 20 years agoI like the way this one speeds along. A reader can easily get caught up in your energy. I want to borrow: those bloody beautiful luscious little lies. I'm sure I have someone I need to say that to. :)
