- Erotic Poetry
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Click heretepid tripod
three periscope limbs
supports me
in my struggle
to cling
capture this moment
forever perfection
let celluloid sing
like my every breath
your praise
the slice
a timespan
shorter than fiction
boundless direction
committed to eternity
or the dignified ageing
of a yellowing canvas
hold it
yes
just like that
no wait
higher
yes
and project
your entire soul
into my omniscient eye
later i will
like you asked
declare my entire trust
between your omnipotent lips
and trade
as long as you wish
for this right now
a precious present
fraction of affection
immortalised
- COMMENTS
Honey123over 19 years agoAs always Liar, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. You have made that person you had in mind when writing this poem, immortalized in black and white.
Honey
Dustystarover 19 years agoI do wish that your pieces had been posted side by side today so that the impact of the juxtaposed realities could be compared. Hopefully your faithful readers, myself included, will sort it all out.
As usual, great work, friend. Part one is so subtle and lulling that part 2 knocks you flat.
