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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/15/2021
Created 08/24/2004
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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

oh no you don't
at 3 in the fucking morning
blare Born In The USA
at tinnitus rates
through concrete and paint
and into my tranquil
in dire need of NyQuil
tossing and burning
insomnia bed

just
oh just
when I thought
the enticing sandman
would blow my lids
to peace
you flip a disc
and Enter Sandman
blows my liability
to pieces

I could pick up a bat
and in full PJ battle uniform
march over to demand
a reduction
of volume
or your half deaf
intoxicated head

but for my Gandhi ass
another course
will have to do

to Teen Spirit tones
I slug myself to sleep
with pre noon plans
of sweet revenge

to get those paintings
hammered into place
just a thin wall away
from your horribly
haunting, hopefully hurting
hangover

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
God!!

I'm going to be singing 'Enter Sandman' all day now LOL

Playing air guitar... Great stuff hon ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Frustration felt. I empathize and sympathize as I have one of those jackasses living across from me.

Thanks?I much enjoyed this.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
snap 2

I believe snap 2 snapped me better than snap 1. Honestly, I need to read them both again, but I enjoyed this one more.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Dammit!

I just get my desktop cleaned after reading Catbabe's suburbia, and now this!

Thanks for the laugh, Liar!

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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perfect description

I have used prenoon lawn mowings in this way but since I have kids, that is punishment enough -- too much of course, but what is important is to say, this was a great write

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