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impressive
impressive
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reality

love
need not be unveiled
to enrich

desire
need not be consummated
to fulfill

hope
need not be expressed
to inspire

tomorrow
need only be ours
to imagine

~ ~ ~

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Huh

The ending is cutesy? I personaly think rules are made for one purpose and one alone...to be broken.

ty,bd

LinderellaLinderellaover 18 years ago
God!

Talent obviously doesnt grow on trees or Impressive would have some.

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 18 years ago
Hmm not sure I agree

Oh well....I seldom comment on poems because I don't consider myself a poet....BUT...I have to on this one.

Those people trashing your poem are particularly hurtful and unfair as I think it's a DAMN good one. One I wish I had written :)

Don't let anybody tell you otherwise Imp...it left me thinking of all those feelings unsaid and unfelt.

Kudos to you.

pishposhpishposhover 18 years ago
I'm with Puck

I wish they had 0's cause that is what you deserve.

No talent at all, dear. Give it up.

puck444puck444about 19 years ago
not sure? me either

she shows very little "talent or imagination' she has many friends. That would explain it

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