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need not be unveiled
to enrich
desire
need not be consummated
to fulfill
hope
need not be expressed
to inspire
tomorrow
need only be ours
to imagine
~ ~ ~
The ending is cutesy? I personaly think rules are made for one purpose and one alone...to be broken.
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Oh well....I seldom comment on poems because I don't consider myself a poet....BUT...I have to on this one.
Those people trashing your poem are particularly hurtful and unfair as I think it's a DAMN good one. One I wish I had written :)
Don't let anybody tell you otherwise Imp...it left me thinking of all those feelings unsaid and unfelt.
Kudos to you.
I wish they had 0's cause that is what you deserve.
No talent at all, dear. Give it up.
she shows very little "talent or imagination' she has many friends. That would explain it