Rite

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Liar
Liar
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I fall by the altar
of notions shooting
curved syllables
from behind the wall
of your tremble,

lift the sacred sangreal
forever besung as
you
to my lips,

and kiss
a temple.

Liar
Liar
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cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I liked that you compare a body to a temple. The name "Rite" is very appropriate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting images

Cever images, but I found the "assault" and "ritual" metaphors at odds.

Good work, Liar.

Fly

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
AWE'd

In light of better words,

speechless.. thats where

you left me.

-sGp-

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

On knee bended

in sweet supplication

to a temple

of earthy delight ~

Is there any other...

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
I have....

a Temple,<grin> I enjoyed your rite ...liar

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