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Click herethe roundtrip to self realization
sometimes takes longer than expected
closed roads, unanswered doors, lowered blinds
stand out like road signs
giving clues to the obvious
I should have paid more attention
to the danger signs posted
when I first began this journey
I would have saved time, gas and money
but the scenery was fresh and green
the wind rushed through my hair
my skin tingled to the touch of an unknown
adventure I wouldn't have wanted to miss
I love this. Especially the first two lines. I may just have to print those out.
even the danger signs are intriguing.
good write, tt2u
good to see you back
xox
maria
I find this a fairly fresh use of the road/journey/life metaphor.
I like the first stanza strong, but would like to see "unanswered doors, lowered blinds" rethought perhaps.
And I am rubbed wrongly by "gas" in the middle stanza.
The third is the strongest.
Thanks for the read.