Roadtrip

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the roundtrip to self realization
sometimes takes longer than expected
closed roads, unanswered doors, lowered blinds
stand out like road signs
giving clues to the obvious

I should have paid more attention
to the danger signs posted
when I first began this journey
I would have saved time, gas and money

but the scenery was fresh and green
the wind rushed through my hair
my skin tingled to the touch of an unknown
adventure I wouldn't have wanted to miss

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minsueminsuealmost 18 years ago
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I love this. Especially the first two lines. I may just have to print those out.

TathagataTathagataalmost 18 years ago
sums up

the journey quite nicely.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
well, you sold me!!

even the danger signs are intriguing.

good write, tt2u

good to see you back

xox

maria

ReltneReltnealmost 18 years ago
Good Metaphor

I find this a fairly fresh use of the road/journey/life metaphor.

I like the first stanza strong, but would like to see "unanswered doors, lowered blinds" rethought perhaps.

And I am rubbed wrongly by "gas" in the middle stanza.

The third is the strongest.

Thanks for the read.

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