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Click hereShe seduced him slowly,
moving into the room
with candlelight flickering
across her face.
The silk of her dress,
a whisper on the wind.
Glimmer stones embracing her flesh,
brought a sigh of pleasure
from his upturned lips.
She moved with stealth
circling him.
One finger slid up his arm.
The other made trails down his back.
Buttons were popped.
A belt clipped free.
Zipper teeth fell and
the beast was released.
Her grin was wide.
Her eyes hid the lust,
as she tugged on the tool
of her darkest desires.
Brought out a groan
from his chest.
One that she answered
with a whimper of her own.
Soon she was there
planted at his feet.
Her lips making trails
of moist lines.
Upwards they lead,
to swollen tracks of heated skin.
Jerking and flowing
with fiery steam.
Petals of flesh were
moistened with a sneaky tongue.
Warm blankets of heat
made him quiver and
she smiled wide,
before showing him the depth
of her power. . .
narrative poem, certainly not the worst I've read.
But your language suffers from being a bit dull. There is nothing fresh or imaginative here. Perhaps concentrating on concise detail and using some figurative language might help.