See they return

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See, they return;
ah, the tentative movements
and the slow, slow fingers,
with a conniving stealth
in their unbidden pace,
yet a certain, shy wavering;

See, they return,
one by one, with a coyness,
barely half-awakened,
as if her blush should hesitate
along with the murmured thanks,
offered as she half-turns
and curls up - completely satisfied,
with this morning's exercise;

See they return - the hunt is done:
sleek with her liquor,
they taste of his dreams.

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LadyGenevieveLadyGenevievealmost 13 years ago
As always...

The depth one must seek to appreciate, and to enjoy. Exceptional.

bulltlrbulltlralmost 13 years ago
5

sleek with her liquor,

they taste of his dreams.

very nice......

NeonSubtletyNeonSubtletyalmost 13 years ago
So sleek...

If words could be used to percuss a dove commercial, this would be an excellent choice. My only hiccup came with the "barely half-awakened" line which, for whatever reason, stalled a perfect rhythm for me.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
A5

I thought, I commented, I did recommend. It's a nice change.

simply__mesimply__mealmost 13 years ago
indeed

I think the hunt only begins.

'Sleek with her liquor'

wonderful line

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