- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Serendip
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Click hereOh yes,
he's well aware
of every last detail,
every appendix fine print
in the contract of Man.
He just doesn't care,
signed it
Wile E Coyote
anyway. So do
paragraphs apply?
But of course he did consider
the possibility of
impossibility,
the odds of
not here, not now,
and that the consequences of
code sequences piled for moiré
truths might only lead
to predicted chaos
and defeat.
But maybe, just maybe,
one day the moon
howls back.
Have you
considered
that?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 18 years agoYa, ya what TRM said and more. ;)
I like the flow of this, the way it sounds. I even think the formatting (line breaks) are attractive.
TheRainManabout 18 years agoEspecially the ending. This:
But maybe, just maybe,
one day the moon
howls back.
Have you
considered
that?
It provides excellent follow-up, contrast, to what precedes it, and gives the blatant wordiness of the previous strophe sense and purpose.
I don't understand the line construction of the last strophe, the reason to break it that way. It seems to me it would be more effective as one line.
You always provide enjoyable reading.
