- Erotic Poetry
- She Came
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once when i came to you
your life
changed.
you went from
blonde to red
drinking me
like syrup
and trading boys for tenderness.
you came
on the floor
in the art gallery
tackling love
and me
pinpointing innocence
and discarding it
next to Cassatt.
you came on rainy nights
when parents slept
and friends thought
we were friends
despite the unmistakable rustle
of sleeping bags.
when we came together
it was innocent
shy, and young,
something I'd lose
to the winds of age
and new prospects.
when you came
you were magic
sparks flying from blue eyes
bubbles of laughter
kissing me
red hair
young
when we came.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 19 years agoPerfect analogy! that line hooked me and made me smile huge. Great job, babe!
Du Lacabout 19 years agoAlthough I feel the words could be stronger I loved this image..
quote:
you came
on the floor
in the art gallery
tackling love
and me
pinpointing innocence
and discarding it
next to Cassatt
the image of a Cassatt.. impressionism.. the blues, pinks and sharp jabs of heavy paint, very physical use of art.. usually displaying when you step back a mother and child.. innocence displayed on the wall, blurred when close up... and the physicalness of the "tackle" of love and orgasm flinging innocence to the wind..
great image thank you for the journey~
Du Lac
matriarchabout 19 years agojust gets better and better. This is a beautiful rendition of that first love of youth, the one that lingers in your heart, long after it has left your life. Well done SIMA.
