- Non-Erotic Poetry
- She's Gone
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Click hereSlanted rays
shine on gardens
unattended
Faded headline
in the milkbox
time suspended
Slender grass
hides her footprints
next to mine
Muddied birdbath
distant piping
nature retreats
Peeling paint
rusty nails
broken hearts
Waiting
She will return...
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoIn spite of the beautiful imagery there still exists an air of sadness about this lovely rendering. Beautiful.
Anonymousover 18 years agoIt's amazing how a few words can bring a little melancholy to the heart!
Written with soul!
Maria2394over 18 years agomore of an opinion, okay, I just think it would be much stronger without the last line. Thats all :) good work
dcpoet44over 18 years agoof emotion exploding in this one......love this image:
Peeling paint
rusty nails
broken hearts
solid piece......don
Anonymousover 18 years agomuch into poetry, that's my sister's thing, but I liked this one.
