- Erotic Poetry
- Slow Dance
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His arms wrap
around me like
vines to a tree.
His eyes search
mine and we
begin to move slowly.
Our bodies pressed together,
his warm breath
on my skin.
I'm lost in his embrace.
we've become one,
united in bliss.
We sway to the beat
of the music,
our music.
- COMMENTS
jthserraalmost 20 years agothat I think if you capitalized more on the simile in the first stanza would really sparkle. His arms like vines is a vivid image that shows us what is happening, if you can carry the images like that into subsequent stanzas some your poem will be that much more vivid. Again, a beautiful dance with a potential to become ballet. Nice one.
jim : )
