Star Seeds~

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Star Seeds~

We planted the star seeds late last fall
along the back edge of a pasture of rye grass
come late spring / early summer we were in awe
when the tiny stars 'hatched' and rose at last

I would never have believed that stars hatched
but there they were flying like butterflys with tiny flash lights
as the sun went down the stars arose, crisscrossed and dashed
in the night these baby stars were born and took flight

They danced around and hovered over the earth
before making the journey to the sky where they will lay
we felt blessed to watch these stars in their birth
they were fire flys but we relished the idea of stars being made~

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Intriguing

title. Like the images you've created here. I agree with LeBroz on the last line, it sounds a little awkward on the tongue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Agree! Lose the last line.

A.M.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Enjoyed this write

But would have been better

If that last line were lost.