Subspace Beckons

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Sir_Nathan
Sir_Nathan
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His words hit home
And stop you in your tracks
And you wonder how you got here.

Shaking your head
Trying to remember you are just sitting in front of a computer
Mesmerised
Wondering
What will He say next?

What will i say next?
He questions you.
Do you answer truthfully
Or commit the sin of lying to protect yourself?

Or do you leap into the unknown?
Take a risk?
And be honest, He requests,
Is that really how you feel?

Answer Him
Feel your inner flood
Touch your desire to open up
Caress your subconsciousness
And concentrate on the exchange.

What is happening here?
A little voice says,
A voice that echos
A voice you want to ignore.

Wanting to climb back up on that pedestal He took away
And turned to dust.
Naked as you came into this world you hope you sound credible
As the words you longed to speak tumble from your lips

Who is this person inside you
That feels so vulnerable yet free
A softer you that wants nothing more
Than the privilege of curling up on His lap?

Sir_Nathan
Sir_Nathan
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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
perfect

god, You captured it perfectly. I'm still in awe each and every time i am halted....and struck with those feelings. :)

-emilyne

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
subspace spectacular!

thank You for putting into words something so very hard to describe....so beautiful Sir Nathan! *appreciation of Your work sparkling like diamonds in her eyes of fire* blessed be Sir Nathan and His sub who inspires Him so well! *smiles*

purringgurlpurringgurlover 19 years ago
Once again

Once again You look into the heart of the subs...feeling what they think.

As always, excellent writing, Sir Nathan!