Subway Girl

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xelliebabex
xelliebabex
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Subway girl

He smiles when he sees her.
It happens every day.
Silly little things she does,
just take his breath away.

He thinks about her often;
She's always on his mind.
Like a song stuck in his head,
The most memorable kind.

Each morning on the subway
She sits with braids and books
He longs for her to lift her head
And exchange startled looks.

He sits at a quiet distance
He will not speak to greet
Fears do shake his confidence
His tongue admits defeat

But...

He smiles when he sees her.
It happens every day.
Silly little things she does,
just take his breath away.

For my friend LaRascasse, Happy Birthday!

xelliebabex
xelliebabex
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice birthday present

Your best poem.

Five.

LaRascasseLaRascasseover 11 years ago
Wow...

Very few birthday gifts mean as much to me as this one. Thanks for putting this much thought into it and writing such a lovely poem just for me.

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Well done -

a nice read and a perfect birthday present.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE SUBWAY RUNS INTO DIFFERENT LINES

with a multitude of passengers. Some are noticeable. TK U MLJ LV NV

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